reading with no answers

by User 8454

Heart pounding,palms sweaty, I reached for the door knob but, it would not turn. Try as I might my hands slick with sweaty fear slipped and slid around the knob. As if things could not get worst I panicked, my heart pounded against my ears, a double beat that resounded throughout the room and back into my chest. my breath came in quicker and quicker , my throat constricted as the moisture was slowly sucked away by the short quick rasps of breath. The room swirled, my legs became heavy, all turned dark and then, oblivion.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. reading with no answers

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Not a bad alternate turn of events. Very visceral and frightening, even if it got a bit jumbled in the beginning there. Thanks for sequeling!
    LoA

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