"Out of my mind."

by Never Explain

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I was living, but I was nonexistent. It was bliss. I felt like I was watching everything I had every experienced, in or or out of my mind, and visually flying through emotions, memories, things that I couldn’t even explain.
Then, it all stopped. I was going back. I apparently had forgot that they control all of this. I was dragged, out of my blissful nonexistence, into another twisted version of what I believe to be normal.
I was standing on a silhouetted world, I looked at my own hands. Black as soot. The sky was all red with a white orb in the sky. Twisted forms of leaf-bare trees contrasted in the atmosphere of blood. I saw a white form walking, no, floating in the distance.
It appeared to be a woman, all white. Even her parasol was white. I called to her. It looked like she turned to me. Her size shifted, but it was just her way of moving towards me.
She opened her eyes. All red, nothing else.
“Out of my mind. .dnim ym fo tuo” She said in a voice most unlike a woman’s
It was my voice.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. "Out of my mind."

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, this is really great. I love the surreal feel to the whole story. And the reverse script at the end is a very nice touch.
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  2. "Out of my mind."

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great image and visual and then some nice twists and turns to it. This one ought to be a unique challenge to do cooperatively. I’ll hold off for a bit in hopes that Stovo will do an addition soon. Cause this kind of insanity, warped by three minds at once…bound to be even harder to follow.
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  3. "Out of my mind."

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 3 months ago

    Palindrome…interesting indeed. The specter is his feminine side? Teasing him, thinking he has company but he’s all alone?

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