Freedom to be You

by Apple

She was sitting by the pond, pondering how she should handle the news of her big brother’s addiction. He had always been such an inspiration to her, such a role model, and now all she felt that all she had ever thought about him was wrong. She was his baby sister! She needed someone to look up to. Right?

Wrong, Ayah. she realized. You don’t need someone else to tell you what to do, or what kind of person you should be. What you need is to be you. Uniquely you. That’s why your parents named you Ayah in the first place! They didn’t want you to feel like you were just another Emily or Julia. They wanted you to be free and unique. Free to be yourself! Free to be who YOU want to be, not who-

“Ayah? Are you out here?” She heard her brother say.

She stood up and started towards him, knowing what she had to do.

She was now free.

Comments

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  1. Freedom to be You

    WEE!!!!!'s Buddy Icon WEE!!!!!

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Aww:)
    Ayah is such a pretty name, and I think you did very well capturing her emotions.
    Names should leave you free to express yourself.

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awe, very cute name! and a very cute ficlet too. =)

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    Trying to Blend's Buddy Icon Trying to Blend

    Posted 6 months ago

    That’s a very nice name and story to go with. :)

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very pretty name and sweet Ficlet. WEE !!!! is right, names should leave you free to express yourself—it’s a reason I don’t particularly enjoy being an Emma. I can name seven others (at least) in my grade.

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    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 6 months ago

    Ayah’s a good one too! And a beautiful character, as well.
    LoA

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    Apple's Buddy Icon Apple

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ayah (meaning): Sparkling, twinkling
    from babynamesworld.com

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    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 6 months ago

    Thanks Apple, that is a sweet story and an interesting name.

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