Yearnings

by horrorfan13

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Yearnings

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very passionate.

  2. Yearnings

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice, Suggest you break it into paragraphs. It will heighten the tension some.

    S.J.

  3. Yearnings

    Dani H. Mefel's Buddy Icon Dani H. Mefel

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think it’s beautiful

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