I saw you

by Bartimaeus

Every day, every night, before i slept, before i woke… I saw you. Even before I knew you, I saw you… I dreamed of lying next to you, running my fingers through your soft hair gently and kissing the silken skin of your cheek softly.
I drempt many times of you, yet there was only one thing I could not imagine… One thing that I longed for that my dreams could not simulate…
My heart ached to hear those three sweet words… And though i saw you say them in my dreams, the words did not come. They played with my heart and taunted me, like a cat playing with a ball of yarn…
After several years, i wondered if id ever hear those words. I stopped having the dreams, and my faith in finding you eventually faded…
And now, gazing into your deep sapphire eyes, the dreams come back to me, and i smile as you hold me ever closer and whisper the words ive longed to hear for so long into my ear…
“I love you…”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. I saw you

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    Posted 6 months ago

    i love it

  2. I saw you

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    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very sweet telling of love finally found. Very romantic that way.
    LoA

  3. I saw you

    Lovely's Buddy Icon Lovely

    Posted 6 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I love how it begins.

  4. I saw you

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    Posted 5 months ago

    This was beautiful, I thought. It’s amazing how that feels, isn’t it? Having an imagining come true. Had to sequel.
    LoA

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