My Guardian Angel.

by Kinetic Kenzie™

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you will never hurt me again.
day turns to night, and back.
and you think of me.
i know you do.
and i think of you too.
but not of what you think of me.
because you dont matter.
any longer…

i have a protector.
she will not fall.
made of stone,
and all my own.
my angel.

my prayers rise with her.
they float to the heavens,
and she gives them to God.
and he hears me say:

‘please give me the strength to endure hatred,
and the peace of mind, that their comments are wasted. dear god, please help me love my enemies.’

my guardian angel,
I know she’s looking down at me.
and she hears me talk to you.
and i say:

‘you will never step on me again.’

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. My Guardian Angel.

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah! I like the headstrong faith of this character. ADORE the last line. I love good, strong, independent female characters. Especially right now.
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  2. My Guardian Angel.

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Totally agree with Storykeeper. Great job on this! Very well written.
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  3. My Guardian Angel.

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    There’s something very lyrical about this poem, like it deserves to be set to music. Extraordinarily written.
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  4. My Guardian Angel.

    Robotech_Master's Buddy Icon Robotech_Master

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m amused that this story is “double inspired.” It makes use of a photo inspiration, but also uses one of the “last line” inspirations you get if you cycle through the “story ender” box enough times. Kudos; very nicely done.

  5. My Guardian Angel.

    Ramy's Buddy Icon Ramy

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love this story. It is very well written.

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