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“Dreamer!Dreamer!”,Tiny screamed.Her voice shreiked her way through my ears through a short straight passage into my heart.
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Posted 4 months ago
Pretty good line there at the end. Now you just have to put it into a bit more context to make it really effective.
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Auckland,NZ
I am 15 years old at the moment.I started to write last year.I have always been good at English,but it wasn’t to last year that I realised I might have talent.I started writing poetry when I was 12.
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Published on March 24, 2008.
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