The Painting

by Katherine Lenado

“How can I help you?” I asked when I saw a man enter my store.
“I was looking for a painting. Something vibrant, colorful, exciting, full of passion. Have anything that fits under that list of adjectives?” the man asked. I stopped sketching and looked up at the man, then back down at my work.
“Of course I do,” I said, “Are you looking for elegant or a piece that is way out there and unexpected?”
“Way out there and unexpected, for sure.”
“Alright then. Walk with me.” I took him into the back room of the store and showed him all of the most lively and sparkling paintings we had. He chose the piece with a child drawing a flower in a vase. The colored pencils the child was using stood out most.
“Any particular reason you picked this one?” I asked.
“My wife loves to draw, and this painting reminded me of her. I think I’ll give it to her for her birthday.”
“Well, I’m sure she’ll enjoy it.” I said.
“Thank you,” he said.
“No, thank you,” and he was off.
I returned to my sketch, and off I worked

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

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    Posted 4 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice description of the painting…and I like the picture =]
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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Well told and straight-forward but kind of lacking for drama.
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