A Great Friend

by Ramy

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There it was, the most beautiful creature I had ever seen. A wonderful, amazing creature with deep blue wings. As I walked over to it, it glimmered in the sunlight. I thought to myself what an amazing butterfly. I took another step toward it and stopped. It flew gently over to me and landed on my nose. I let out a quiet giggle. The creature went back to the flower it was resting on before and ripped off a piece off of it. It flew back to me and gently placed the flower in my hand.

It came to be 6 o’clock and I had to hurry home for dinner. But everywhere I went the butterfly followed. I said to the butterfly, “Wait here. I will come back after dinner.” The butterfly sat back on the flower and waited. When I returned it was still there.

Every day after that night I returned to the butterfly to play with it and made sure it wasn’t lonely or sick. We became great friends even though most people thought it was just a butterfly. But it wasn’t just a butterfly it was my friend.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Great Friend

    Overlooked_Merchandise's Buddy Icon Overlooked_Merchandise

    Posted 3 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    an okay story. different at the most. i mean, a butterfly being your friend? you dont hear that one everyday. different
    LoA

  2. A Great Friend

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Imaginative and sweet, I thought.

  3. A Great Friend

    Ramy's Buddy Icon Ramy

    Posted 3 months ago

    I agree but it fits in the story sort of.

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