My Tower

by wytherwings

Ok this is a poem I had to write for school. It’s a cool kind of poem- there are certain lines you have to repeat at certain times in different stanzas. Complicated- but really cool when you read it. It’s called a Pantoum.
So anyways, here is my atempt:

My Tower

You’re like a tower
Tall and strong.
With all of your power
You don’t seem to belong.

Tall and strong
Yet it’s you and you only.
You don’t seem to belong
And don’t you ever get lonely?

You seem so alone.
Are you really that bold?
Sitting on your throne
You’re so cold.

Are you really that bold?
With all of your power
You’re so cold
You’re like a tower.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. My Tower

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love poems that follow a scheme like this. Aweome! I give you an A+
    :D
    LoA

  2. My Tower

    ACORN's Buddy Icon ACORN

    Posted 6 months ago

    I really like this.

  3. My Tower

    More Ways Than One's Buddy Icon More Ways Than One

    Posted 6 months ago

    Way better than mine.

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