A Proposal and Flight

by Ryan Earle

“Henry, come in.” she led him into the house. “Rest, I’ll make us some tea.” She ordered.

Henry examined his surroundings through his thick hood and veil. The inside was just as he remembered, filled with shaker furniture and lit by a warm stove.

As she came into the living room, Henry asked “Rebecca, marry me.” She stopped for a beat, the tea still in her hands. “Yes.” she smiled.

“Now, let me see your face.” she cooed. “You wont like it.” he replied. “Come now, I’m the woman that wants to become your wife, no injury could change that.” she answered as she removed his veil.

Henry watched as Rebecca’s kind, smiling face drained of its color. She dropped her hand and moved slightly back. He heard himself saying “I told you wouldn’t like it.” as she covered her face with her hand and her eyes filled with tears.

“It’s okay”, he mumbled as he darted for the door. Rebecca stood and started to follow, “Don’t follow me.” Henry cried.

Henry fled into darkness as Rebecca watched him, silhouetted in the doorway.

Comments

  1. A Proposal and Flight

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Tragic, but kind of silly of the woman to be so cavalier about something he tried to warn her about. Heart breaking.

  2. A Proposal and Flight

    Ryan Earle's Buddy Icon Ryan Earle

    Posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for the input! I don’t have Rebecca as well developed in my mind as I do Henry, that’s probably the problem.

    I’ll try to develop her assertive personality in a few more ficlets in the series (pre and post).

    Ryan

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