Stunts and Motivation

by THX 0477

Wishing I’d remembered the old neighborhood better I turned blindly down an alley. I wasn’t sure how much distance there was between myself and my low-slung pursuers. It probably wasn’t enough.

The alley went on for several blocks, but an 8 ft high chain-link fence blocked my path. I didn’t even slow down, just veered left towards the stack of dirty milk crates. I leapt off the first crate, one ricochet step off the fence, one off the wall, and I basically collided my midsection into the top of the fence. My feet flailed upwards, and my head swung downwards. Something ripped, and something stung, but I fell, albeit with no apparent grace, into a pile of garbage.

No time to look, as I could hear the Spanish swear words echoing off the brick and mortar, so I just kept running. I rolled my thumb to center, benefit of joint laxity, and started trying to work the cuff over my sweaty hand. I’d always figured I could do this, and no time like the present to try. That’s life; it’s all about your motivation.

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    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the description of the “low-slung” pursuers. Very memorable

    LoA

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    duckn's Buddy Icon duckn

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like it i like it. visual and action packed.

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Whoa, the last line is really cool. I like it a lot. I also like how active it is.

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    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “That’s life; it’s all about your motivation.”
    All right, Mr. DeMille, I’m ready for my close-up. :D
    More! More! More!
    LoA

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