What did I learn in algebra today???????

by madwriter108

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I was sitting in algebra class one day, when my eyes met the most beautiful creature in the world: Brittany.

Her hair was so long and blonde, her pimple-free face, her tight mini-skirt, and her heavenly white blouse, which was small enough to show her belly button ring.her skin was so tan, her face was glowing like the Lord Almighty.

Her boots were made for more than just walking, though. Holding her books agaist her body, she breezed by by me like i wasn’t even there. “Hi’ i nervously said. She turned her head, and looked around the room. “Did somebody say something?”. I was just about to shout, “It was me!”

But, she looked around the room again, said “It must have been the wind”. She walked out of the room.

And, I thought to myself, “what did i learn in algebra today?”

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. What did I learn in algebra today???????

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 6 months ago

    You learned:
    Girls can be so tantilizing, it’s just evil when they snatch themselves away.

    Great conversation and vivid description of the girl! YO\ou really studied! ;)
    LoA

  2. What did I learn in algebra today???????

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 6 months ago

    Good painting of the image =)

  3. What did I learn in algebra today???????

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ah, young unrequited love. This brings back many a sorrowed memory. As a ginger headed geek, I played the young man in this scenario many times during my school days. I think you did a very good job of showing his despair and longing for something just out of reach.
    I suggest taking your time on the next one and that you pay a little more attention to the grammar, specifically capitalization. Bad habits are hard to break. Ridding yourself of them now will help you become a better writer.

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