I hate everything about you

by I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

I hate everything about you,
I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you walk,
I hate the way you talk,
I hate the way you breathe,
I hate the way that you tease.
You’ll get the message by the time I’m through.
I hate everything about you,
You’ll come to realize that when your back is turned I’ll stab and destroy you. You get the message?
I hate everything about you.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. I hate everything about you

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sounds like a normal girl in school looking for revenge against someone they say. Good portrail of that!
    LoA

  2. I hate everything about you

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I have a strange affinity for good hate poems. There just as good as love poems.
    LoA

  3. I hate everything about you

    a lost boy's Buddy Icon a lost boy

    Posted 6 months ago

    Froget the things you hate.
    It helps you remember the things you love.

  4. I hate everything about you

    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted 6 months ago

    hey wats ur name???

  5. I hate everything about you

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 6 months ago

    My name? Who are you talking to?

  6. I hate everything about you

    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted 6 months ago

    u Frank Iero person u…..duh

  7. I hate everything about you

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 6 months ago

    Oh, my name is Tori, sorry.

  8. I hate everything about you

    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted 6 months ago

    oh ok sorry i thought well your description and stuff sound like my friend fallen

  9. I hate everything about you

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, wow. “They’re”. Not “there”. I feel stupid.
    LoA

  10. I hate everything about you

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    i love it but o do agree with the lost boy live life with the things you love not hate

  11. I hate everything about you

    Misheru O'ku's Buddy Icon Misheru O'ku

    Posted 5 months ago

    sounds a little like the speech she gave at the end of the movie “10 things i hate about you”

  12. I hate everything about you

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 5 months ago

    Hey, yeah it does.

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