Not Pretty

by Blusparrow

I sighed and walked in on his heels like I was in a haunted house. He put his hand behind his back and I held it.

Mike: Don’t look at the second row.

I closed my eyes as we pass; only cracking them open a little to see a figure on the ground. Oh my gosh. Suddenly I felt light headed. He grasped my hand harder. I looked to my left and… Let me just say it wasn’t pretty.

Me: I don’t know if I can do this.

Mike turns to me giving me that really sad face. His eyes and all around them were red. Wow, he is really weak about this. Then again he saw everything.

Mike: But I need you here with me. Without you I don’t know if I could do this either.

We kept walking then stopped and he looked to the right.

Me: What?
Mike: This is the row we sat in. Don’t you remember?

Just then it hit me. The story replayed in my mind like a flashback…

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Not Pretty

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    I might have over done puting it as muture, but I just didn’t want to risk it. I couldn’t bring myself to making it really graphic, I just couldn’t.
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    Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars' Buddy Icon Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    There really is no reason for this to be marked mature.

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    Seriously? Ok!

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    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 6 months ago

    Whoa…tragic. So you don’t want to describe it, so you leave it to me. Its not like I’m the Queen of tragic stories or anything. Great job.
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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    Nono I just meant for the description of the airplane. I wanted you to do the flashback because I wanted you to have challenge.
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    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 6 months ago

    Well, thanks for the challenge. Ha. I went all mellow though.
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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Tragedy, I agree! Going to read the flashback.
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    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 6 months ago

    I will definitley read the flashback!!

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