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Flee For the Hills (CLFM 41)

by SJHundak/S.J.Willing

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The wedding was a gorgeous affair. Serious money had been put into this 300 guest do. The bride looked radiant, the groom looked like an ass.

“He does rather, doesn’t he?” Les agreed with my description.

So far the jerk had made three of the bridesmaid cry, propositioned two others and smacked the ring bearer for getting too close to the cake. The poor mite hadn’t even been tall enough to reach it.

Yet everyone ignored his behavior simply because he was money.

Right now he was on his sixth glass of champagne and the wedding hadn’t even taken place yet.

“I hope she doesn’t go through with it this time,” I said, glancing at my temporalscope.

Damn, so that’s this thing on my wrist. Whatever it was the predictions were good. McLeod was likely to walk away from this bad marriage. Seth wouldn’t beat her near to death and damage her womb beyond use. She would be able to have the children she yearned for.

“Fixed,” Les announced twenty minutes later, then we stepped through another blue portal.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Flee For the Hills (CLFM 41)

    Mystiquee's Buddy Icon Mystiquee

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    So who is the person fixing things and where does he get the power from? I am sure I missed this because I just started reading these. Would love to know. Unfortunately, I like the narrative form of writing. I find that too many spaces disturb my imagination and the flow.

  2. Flee For the Hills (CLFM 41)

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    If I can work it right, all will be revealed in CLFM 47 , the last sequel.

    If I can’t get it to match one of Susan Holder’s sequels I’ll have to write a new one.

    It is harder to read, sorry bout that, but somehow just sequeling myself didn’t seem like a challenge.

    I hope you enjoy what you can read though :)

    S.J.

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