It Was Easy

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

It was so, so easy. Surprisingly so.

I’d followed this guy for close to a month. I knew his daily routines. The route he took to and from work. Where he bought his groceries. I knew all his habits.

I knew where the best place to catch him would be. If it was a nice day, he rode his bike to work. When he did, he always turned down this one alley going home at night. It was usually pretty deserted at night.

I stood off to one side of the alley, a rope in my hands. When I heard him coming, I pulled the rope taught. Just as I had planned, it caught him right in the throat. And he was going fast enough when he hit, he couldn’t scream. All he could do was choke.

I stood over him, and thrust the knife into his heart. It was amazing. A little tension before the blade pierced the skin. The knife was so sharp, flesh and muscle parted like water. After penetrating his heart, I sat there, holding the knife, and watched the life seep out of his eyes.

It was easy.

Now comes the hard part: living with the nightmares.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. It Was Easy

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh… wow
    kind of reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe’s Tell-Tale Heart. The last line mostly. they’re really different, but still
    anyways, this is really good. kind of creepy too. but good
    =]

  2. It Was Easy

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 3 months ago

    I am embarrassed to admit that I have never read Tell-Tale Heart. I really should.
    And thanks, wytherwings. I was going for creepy in this one. :)

  3. It Was Easy

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Don’t really thing a cold blooded killer like him would be bothered by such a thing as a conscience.
    He’s nearly as creepy as the dude in No Country for Old Men.
    LoA

  4. It Was Easy

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. This was amazing. Very creepy, with such great word choice. Flesh and muscle parted like water. Incredible.
    LoA

  5. It Was Easy

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. This was amazing. Very creepy, with such great word choice. Flesh and muscle parted like water. Incredible.
    LoA

  6. It Was Easy

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    freaky I agree with everything above…this story gave me the creeps! i love it!
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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Perfect descriptions for the story, with the insight to the narrator’s mind, and the consequences of his (or her, I guess) actions. Well….sort of like the Tell-Tale Heart, yes. I love it.

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love Tall Tale Heart! And the beating beating beating! Grew loulder and faster! It does remind me of that too! Good job!
    LoA

  9. It Was Easy

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So descriptive, life through the eyes of a killer. Kind of reminds me of Crime and Punishment where the guy premidates a plan for the perfect murder, but then loses what’s left of his sanity due to the guilt. Excellent.

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