Harsh Excitements

by Caffeinated

With a light heart, I clutched the miraculous paper to my chest and shakily got up from where I had been sitting. My hair whipped around me as the Oklahoma wind flowed pleasntly in the midst. I looked out at the broad sunset spilling over the flatlands and wiped my tears away.

I had to tell someone about this.

I ran, far and hard, tripping as excitement made me go faster. My bare feet hit the harsh dirt and I ran around the trailers, finally reaching the one painted bright red.

“Jim? Jim, you there?” I asked, knocking hard on the screen door. A tall, lanky boy answered the door, brushing his hand through his thick, long, brown hair and smiled at me. He opened the door with one well-built arm and leaned against the doorpost.

“Hey Lani, how are ya?” He asked in his deep cowboy accent, his brown eyes dancing.

“I’m great, would you look at this?!” I practically shoved the paper into his hand, grinning with my own pride. He skimmed over it and then looked up at me, his smile disappearing.

Comments

  1. Harsh Excitements

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 4 months ago

    Really well written. Leaves me wondering what exactly is on that piece of paper. Nice work.
    LoA

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