Unlocking the Door

by RJ

Six days after Brinna returned home her mother came up to the door again. Only this time she had a key. Boy was she in for a surprise when she opened the door.

” Oh! Oh my GOD ! Brianna!”

Ohhh how her mother wished she had just left the door closed and never opended it! She had seen something that desturbed her very much.

” Nick… Nick come up here!” said Jennifer curled up into a ball sobbing on the floor

” What?! What is it???! OH OH that! Come on honey lets get out of here you don’t need to see any more of this!”

to be contiued…..

Comments

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  1. Unlocking the Door

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    Russell this doesnt sound to good. lol. write more this is getting really good!!

  2. Unlocking the Door

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    Posted 6 months ago

    Hm…So, like. They don’t wanan see Brianna?

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