The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

by Stovohobo

Miles off the District of Columbia, the machines are activating.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    I had “were,” but it was one character too long.

  2. The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Present tense makes it sound more ominous.

  3. The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Scary. Impressive start to a sci-fi nightmare in 64 characters.

  4. The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

    J.B. Williams' Buddy Icon J.B. Williams

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Well it looks like I know where I’m not going to vacation at.

  5. The Machines (64-Character Challenge)

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Why do I have the theme to The Terminator going through my head all of a sudden? ;)
    Good one!
    LoA

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