Admiral Tommy Tomato

by Lone Writer

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“O.K, listen up here, Fruits!” I cried. “I’m Tommy Tomato and I’m gonna help all of you leftover fruits escape!”

I saw Kevin making for the basement door. “Kevin, get back here!” I roared.

The Kiwi flinched and rolled back towards me.

“ PERRY !” I yelled towards the pantry.

The plum looked out nervously. “Yes sir?”

“Suck in that gut of yours and get some courage! Or I’ll make ya inta a pudding myself!”

Perry the plum looked pale.

“Now, Fruits…Attack!”

All the remaining Fruits brave enough to follow me, Admiral Tommy Tomato launched themselves at the Pie Lady. She screamed and fell to the ground. As the remaining fruits laid cover fire I escaped with the rest of the brigade.

I’m Admiral Tommy Tomato reporting, and no fruit will be left behind!

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cool.. sticking together as a team, that works out well.

  2. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 6 months ago

    GO FRUIT !

  3. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 6 months ago

    Yay fruity friends!!!

  4. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 6 months ago

    Yay fruity friends!!!

  5. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    YAA GO FRUIT !!! HAHAHA ! NICE!
    LoA

  6. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Team work makes the team work.

  7. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love it!!

  8. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 6 months ago

    YES !!! GO FRUIT DUDES !!

  9. Admiral Tommy Tomato

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Working as a team to escape a terrible fate…GO FRUIT !!!! :-D
    LoA

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