Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

by Freedom

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Oh jeez you are pathetic. Or we are.

Why even think like that?

Well, while most teenagers are spending their spring break at the beach, here you are, we are stuck in your, our room again on the computer.

I don’t believe that’s a fair statement. Most of my, our spring break has in fact been spent… around.

Around as in, the house? Oh please, get real.

I am real. It is you who is not.

SO not true, I’m part of you. Which makes me real, which makes me right. Because you, we always like to be right, right?

Now that’s just rude.

You never said you, we were nice either.

Well, I’m saying it now. Nicenicenicenicenice. So ha.

So ha nothing. I swear if I could I’d drag you, us out of your, our room to some fresh air. Good for your, our brain.

Well, good luck trying. See that’s why I’m more important. I have the will power to get out. And you do not. So HA!

Well, did you ever think about it the other way around….Oh got you there. What you think about that?

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  1. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoa, that turned out strange.
    LoA

  2. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    HEHE , Nice. Freedom, are you commenting on yourself? Haha I get it. LOL
    LoA

  3. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 5 months ago

    I love how you strung all of the “nice’s” together, I could just hear the attitude behind them!
    And by the way, get out! Go for a walk! Sit on the porch, or step, or curb, for goodness sake!
    LOL !
    LoA

  4. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Pshhh! Nice Convo Freedom!
    LoA

  5. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Very existential and philosophical debate about the nature of existence and reality. You sound very conflicted.
    LoA

  6. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 5 months ago

    Well, you’re not the only teenager stuck in the house all spring break!

    I live where there are no warm beaches around…

    Sigh…

    Good conversation though!

    LoA

  7. Spring Break (200th Ficlet Challenge)

    butterflygirl6106's Buddy Icon butterflygirl6106

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    You know trying to get your selt to understand is somewhat a battle, but you really tap on the togatherness with self in this story. Very nice.

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