Words Unspoken: Quiet Suffering

by Dangerous Angels

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The girl felt a stab of pain. She brought the tips of her fingers to her mouth and touched blood. The girl loosened her teeth’s death-like grip upon her tongue. “Every time I (try to) speak to you, I live to regret it.”, were the words the girl wanted to yell, to scream, to have tattooed on her body. The girl quietly walked out of the room. For now, her tongue would have to pay the price for the words left unspoken.

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  1. Words Unspoken: Quiet Suffering

    Susan Holder is terrific's Buddy Icon Susan Holder is terrific

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ah – the words left unspoken.. they bite… (no reflective pun intended) though.. yours actually do… so not sure you meant the pun…

    I am not into pain (and not trying to encourage this) but think you did a great job conveying the image and emotions depicted in this ficlet.

  2. Words Unspoken: Quiet Suffering

    khepa's Buddy Icon khepa

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nice…!

  3. Words Unspoken: Quiet Suffering

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is amazing. Pretty much the story of my life, minus the toungue biting.

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