Make It Better

by You Know You Love Mee!

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It was an accident. That’s what Kaitlyn kept making herself believe. It had to be. She was no gay idiot. Well, she didn’t think she was. There had to be a way to turn this around. Make it better again, there just had to be.

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  1. Make It Better

    BernerOberland's Buddy Icon BernerOberland

    Posted 6 months ago

    She was no gay idiot> insulting and homophobic remark.

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    BernerOberland's Buddy Icon BernerOberland

    Posted 6 months ago

    apt title.

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    You Know You Love Mee!'s Buddy Icon You Know You Love Mee!

    Posted 6 months ago

    When I said Gay Idiot,
    It was supposed to be her feelings to herself.
    I ALSO think calling people gay idiots, is very rude, and disrespectful to many people. But those were her thoughts in the story not mine. Hope you forgive me.

    You Know You Love Mee!

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    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 6 months ago

    MyName Is, I don’t think that “gay idiot” is the author’s actual attitude, but rather the thoughts of a character in denial and still trying to figure out who she is, especially after being immersed in mainstream values and mores all of her life. YKYLM , this is interesting, but can be developed further. You’ve got a lot of space to use here. Why not use it?

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