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1. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   Lone Writer

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   Dude…

2. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   BernerOberland

   Posted 3 months ago

   more trash from Kyle

3. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   You Know You Love Mee!

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   Okay story.
   Needs a little editing though. Mostly for punctuation. :]]
   and trash??
   harsh critisism.

   You Know You Love Mee!
   LoA

4. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   BernerOberland

   Posted 3 months ago

   it’s not harsh you both write homophobic stories.

5. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   Music-Hearted

   Posted 3 months ago

   The sad thing is that this has gotten onto the Most Active list. How disappointing.
   LoA

6. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   Kevin Lawver

   Posted 3 months ago

   It’s provocative, but I wouldn’t call it trash. It needs some editing and work, but it’s definitely a story.

7. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   SKermitgorf

   Posted 3 months ago

   The title is offensive

8. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   BARomero

   Posted 3 months ago

   Also it has no relevance to THX ’s story, to which it’s linked.

9. The Little Fag The Couldn't

   Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   I think I’m going to have to agree with Kevin on this one. While it’s not exactly Hemingway (subject matter aside, it’s more along the lines of something I would have written in elementary school), it does make a point. It takes a bully, turns the tables on them, and shows them the error of their ways.
   My only two problems with it (other than formatting): no reason to link it to THX ’s story, and the last line is really pretty pointless.

10. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    Mycroft

    Posted 3 months ago

    

    I don’t have too many problems with the content – although it could certainly use some editing – but linking to a featured ficlet when it’s completely irrelevant, just to get readers, gets an automatic 1-star from me.

11. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    J.B. Williams

    Posted 3 months ago

    

    Yeah, I have to agree with Mycroft. However, a little editing and it could be better

12. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    Aside from spelling, grammer,one huge paragraph, the title, that it has nothing to do with the previous story and it makes no sense, yeah other than that it ’s a great story.
    ~
    sigh

13. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    M.Paul Regret

    Posted 3 months ago

    Why’s this so popular?? It stinks. Not well written. Possibly the worse thing I ever read.

14. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    Robotech_Master

    Posted 3 months ago

    

    It’s so “popular” because clicks and comments and ratings count for popularity. It doesn’t matter if they’re bad ratings. Controversy is the best way to get a highly-rated story. (Just look at my “Best Practices” guides. :)

15. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    lilfroggie321

    Posted 3 months ago

    

    No offense but what the heck?

16. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    emma jo_234

    Posted 3 months ago

    

    Uh, yeah. I’m going to have to agree with everyone here. Besides the fact that you need some serious editing, this uses offensive language and doesn’t have anything to do with “Reading With No Answers.”
    LoA

17. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    ○○♥Promises Broken & Backs Turned♥○○

    Posted 3 months ago

    This is really offensive to lesbians, it’s offensive to anyone who’s gay. I hate when people make fun of them. Even though you’re not offending them. I do agree with everyone.

18. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    ○○♥Promises Broken & Backs Turned♥○○

    Posted 3 months ago

    I did not just write that. I was totally contradicting myself. Wow. I meant to say even if you’re not making fun of them.

19. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    meckanical spider

    Posted 2 months ago

    Insulting as fuck.
    I am bisexual.
    My mother is bisexual.
    My uncle, who happens to be my favorite member of my family, is gay.
    You stupid fuck.

20. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    ○○♥Promises Broken & Backs Turned♥○○

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yeah, I was thinking about saying that bowiedarling, not the whole family part, but it was REALLY insulting. Even to me, and I’m straight.

21. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    Mr.Gabriel

    Posted 2 months ago

    Its pretty good. I agree with everyone else, it needs editing. But its a good idea. The title on the other hand… needs a little bit of work.

22. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    lena

    Posted 2 months ago

    the story in general was bad. its ok to be homophobic but keep it to yourself

23. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 2 months ago

    Well,you’ll have that won’t you?

24. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 2 months ago

    I really don’t see what’s wrong here. I mean it’s not saying like oh we should burn the gays and BISEXUALS . Guess, what nothing really all that bad. You know what I mean I’m not saying that I believe in what I set as a sample, man, I really don’t. Catch my wave? :)

25. The Little Fag The Couldn't

    lena

    Posted 27 days ago

    the story is not as offensive as the title.
    see, many people who are bi,
    or even gay would take this very offensively.
    more so for the title.
    if he changes the title it would be a bit humorous.
    if you have read some of my stories you will see why i took alot of offence to this.
    But i will adnit that the end of the story did make me laugh a bit.

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