To Rebuild A Man

by kaellinn18

I awoke slouched in a metal folding chair, my mouth and throat parched. I worked my tongue around in an effort to reboot my saliva glands. Wincing, I briefly assessed my surroundings. I was in a small concrete room, its only features being a rusty metal table with accompanying chair and a large metal door set flush into the wall.

No sooner had I acclimated myself than there was a loud clank of metal on metal. The door opened, and a man in a brown suit with matching goatee stepped in. “Ah, you’re awake,” he said with a smile. The door closed behind him. He dusted off the chair, sat down, and folded his hands on top of the table.

“Let’s start at the beginning,” he said. “Do you know who you are?” My eyes widened as I tried in vain to access this vital piece of information. “Please attempt to remain calm,” he said softly. “The fact that you don’t know who you are just means the treatment was successful.” He paused before continuing. “Your name is Robert Pritchard. You are a terrorist and a traitor.”

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    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great start! Looking forward to reading more…

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yikes, great, thorough description of everything, really setting it up quite nicely. Killer ending…did not see that coming. Makes me think of ‘A Clockwork Orange’ maybe.
    Loa

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    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m hooked! Please continue, it was very intriguing.
    LoA

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Excellent ficlet! It is begging for a sequel! I love the ending.

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    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Freaking awesome. The last line totally hooked me.

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