Blow a Hole in the World

by THX 0477

Murder is easy. I don’t know how long we stood there facing one another. I don’t know what took her cousins so long to find us. I don’t know why that gun felt so good in my hand.

The gun, the blessed gun, seemed to rise on its own, the dark barrel glistening in the dim light of an urban night. It was a thing of beauty bearing down upon another thing of beauty, one hard and efficient, the other soft and delicate.

“Is this what you want to do, Danny? Is this who you want to be?”

What else is there to be?

“Why don’t you just run away?” I cried. A drop of sweat taunted me at the corner of my eye, but I didn’t dare wipe it. My thumb cocked the hammer with a satisfying click. I hadn’t meant to do that, to be honest. Been meant to do that?

“I want you to choose, Danny.” She was trying to be brave, but I could see the tremble in her fingers. I could see everything. It would be so easy to just pull the trigger. And blow a hole in the world.

It was that last thought that really got me worried.

Comments

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  1. Blow a Hole in the World

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice sequel. I love the intensity, the questioning and the uncertainty. Very tense.

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    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The really hard part is no one following this can say with 100% certainty that he won’t shoot her. There are more than enough great tales where the darkness wins out in the end.
    Looking forward to the next part!
    LoA

  3. Blow a Hole in the World

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 3 months ago

    whoa..intense!! is he gonna shoot her?!?!!

    LOVE it!

  4. Blow a Hole in the World

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 3 months ago

    Yikes, this is so tense!! It’s so… wow. I love this!

  5. Blow a Hole in the World

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with everyone about the tension. awesome series.
    LoA

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