Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

by RJ

After the death of Brianna Nicole Smith, Jennifer, Nick, and Mickey moved out. But, that’s not the end you see. Everyone knows that when some one moves out of a house that has death practically painted on the front door, some one with out knowledge of it will move in. So, who are these poor souls that move in? They are the O’Connor’s, which includes Brandie O’Connor, Mr.O’Connor (Fred), and Mrs.’s O’Connor(Michelle). They had no idea what happend in Smith’s house only five months prior. But, soon to find out is Brandie O’Connor of Brianna’s tragic ending…

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Average Reader Rating: 2.0 stars out of 5

  1. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    Amityville Horror? It’s a nice set up, but comes across as just that, a description of a possible plot. So, good story idea, just could have used a more personal or detail-oriented telling.

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    RJ's Buddy Icon RJ

    Posted 5 months ago

    thanks for the advice

  3. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 5 months ago

    russell this is gonna be really good.

  4. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    Tibby-Marie O'Connor's Buddy Icon Tibby-Marie O'Connor

    Posted 5 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    my parents names are Fred and Michelle. not Bob and Janet.

  5. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    Tibby-Marie O'Connor's Buddy Icon Tibby-Marie O'Connor

    Posted 5 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    and i’m going to kill you for this.
    and make sure if i fall in love,
    it is with CoTy.
    because if it’s not,
    you will die.
    get it ?
    got it ?
    good.
    (:

  6. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    Tibby-Marie O'Connor's Buddy Icon Tibby-Marie O'Connor

    Posted 5 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    and i’m going to kill you for this.
    and make sure if i fall in love,
    it is with CoTy.
    because if it’s not,
    you will die.
    get it ?
    got it ?
    good.
    (:

  7. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 5 months ago

    haha russell stick to the plan

  8. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    Tibby-Marie O'Connor's Buddy Icon Tibby-Marie O'Connor

    Posted 5 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    i don’t like what Hailey is hinting upon.
    you will get hurt.
    i’ll have “Katie”(ahahahahhaha lmfao) kick your ass (:
    BUNNY !

  9. Tragic Endings Bring Tragic Begginings

    lilly's Buddy Icon lilly

    Posted 4 months ago

    actually russell forget the plan. all of it.

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