The Trust Factor

by Overlooked_Merchandise

“Listen,” I said after a bit, “I’m sorry for not listening to you, I guess I was just shocked about everything.”

“It’s not completely your fault. I should have told you about Nathan, though I didn’t so I’m sorry.” Hayley said.

“Yeah,” I said stroking her hair, “but I was a jerk when I should have trusted you.”

“Yeah, you kinda were. But you didn’t try to kill yourself over it.” She said.

“Maybe not physically, but mentaly and socialy? Yes, I was just about dead until I found your note. How did you write that anyway?” I asked.

“Free period, I kinda broke into your locker and stole it out, wrote the letter and put it back. You were in lunch at the time.” She said, “It was perfectly planned her a freak girl.” We both laughed after that.

“We will both have to work on the trust factor. And you are not aloud to touch a gold club for a while.” I said.

We laid there for a while and then got up and went back to my house where we dried off.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The Trust Factor

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice! Now they just have to face Nathan!
    LoA

  2. The Trust Factor

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    Cute interaction, though the end wound up a bit…um, flat in comparison to the rest.

  3. The Trust Factor

    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 6 months ago

    I agree with THX 0477 . Maybe if you stopped before the last line (“We laid there for a while and then got up and went back to my house where we dried off.”) , it would’ve had a nicer ending.
    LoA

  4. The Trust Factor

    You Know You Love Mee!'s Buddy Icon You Know You Love Mee!

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Agree with THX 0477 and Dr.Mousse..
    but you know I still love this SERIES !
    haa.
    keep sequeling though.
    :]]

    You Know You Love Mee!

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