Kid

by Never Explain

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As I walked into the gym, I saw all of the other soldiers staring at me.

I wonder what they are thinking…..

I started to set up some waits to bench. A stalky-looking kid, probably not a day over nineteen, dressed in a green beater and baggy black pants, was staring wide-eyed at me as I piled on weights.

He’ll go away..

He didn’t and now it was starting to irritate me.

“Can I help you?” I asked, turning my head to him and trying my best not to sound irritated.

He jumped back when I spoke.

“Y-you gonna lift those?” He stumbled.

“What do you think I’m here for?” I said, sarcasm dripping.

“C-can I see?” He said quietly.

I nodded, fastened the weights and lied down on the bench.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Kid

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow he is really afraid of him. Interesting, he must look very intimidating then.
    LoA

  2. Kid

    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 6 months ago

    Sorta kinda, you can only look so intimidating in – a armored suit. They are afraid, he is very intimidating just cause they heard how dangerous he is.

  3. Kid

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    good.
    one note though- weights, not waits.
    Otherwise great!

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