It’s really sad that too many of us have that kind of self-image, but great empathy in the writing here. What’s the box?

I was wondering the same thing about the box, it sorta confused me. But ya, it is sad that he thinks of himself that way.

I like this ficlet, the writing is ismple yet powerful. Elisha did say that she wanted sequels, and I can already think of one or two things that the box could be for…hmmm, I might just come back to this one

That must be some special box!

I love how the poor guy feels, looking at himself. I’ve often wondered about the mirror world….now there’s a good idea for another entry…..

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Thats a poor self image.. lucky guy still to have a wife and love. powerful writing. one of your best. cynical. but real.
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wow…..the box…

This is awesome. It’s so real, especially the last line (I think). I just kind of assumed what the box was…

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very good. Love the describtions and such. =)
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oooh…what’s the box?

Nice little peek into what the guy thinks, and probably what some of us think but just don’t say. But then, that’s part of your job, I assume.