A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}

by flute faerie

The faces glared at me, reflecting my image. They were all sad, all bleak. Our grandfather had just died. All us kids were very upset, with tear-stained faces and black dresses and suits. It was after the funeral, and we were all looking at photos we had taken with him. Ones of us at the beach, our faces red. Ones at his house, celebrating his birthday with the whole family. And most recent, when we visited him right before he died; we had gone on a family fishing trip, because we all knew Grandpa loved to fish.

After we had gone through all of them, we found a note in one of the albums. It read:

When you remember me, I don’t want you to see me as just me. I want all of you to see some of you in me. For example, Clarissa, you have my eyes, and John, you have my nose. So I challenge you not to remember me in these photos, but remember me through your looks, and your actions. Let me live on in you.

Frazzled now, we took a mirror out of his dresser. And one by one, we saw a little bit of him in us.

Comments

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  1. A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    That was absolutely lovely, from heartbroken start to wonderful message ending. Excellent work and a fair competitor (IMO) for winner of this challenge.
    LoA

  2. A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 3 months ago

    Thanks THX !

  3. A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That is good! Wow! I love the note that they all read. It jsut says a lot on how he did not want them to grieve for him, but see that their is still a peice that is alive and it is in them.
    LoA

  4. A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    Beautiful! (sniff) Very endearing piece!

    A heartfelt entry!

    LoA

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