Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

by Blusparrow

I can’t sleep and I am slowly fading. I wish I was over you now.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 4 months ago

    Awww, this reminds me a little of one of my friends. She can’t sleep or get over this one boy. Very nicely written.

  2. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 4 months ago

    Yea, its the worse feeling to be hurt and still love someone =(

  3. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    howhardlifeis♥'s Buddy Icon howhardlifeis♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    yeahh soo truee =[

  4. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 4 months ago

    Very well written. Totally describes half of the teenage girls, including me, in our world.
    LoA

  5. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Been there.
    Done that.
    Bought the t-shirt.
    Unfortunately, went back for more. :)
    Love it!
    LoA

  6. Breaking Heart (64k Challenge)

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol, Capital W bought the t-shirt. I think I have the travel mug kicking around in my pantry. Yes, I agree with the others, this is true to the teenage life. And hey, they say write what you know. It looks like you know that bit of good advice, continue to follow it, I like when ya do.

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