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The Eighth Wonder of the World.

by MissJonas1492

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A vast expanse. Swirling colors of blue, gray, and green. It never stops moving, and the current gently sweeps its victims off to the fury of the underwater world. The cooling sensation of the water permits the sea creatures to relax and see the majesty and wonderment that is the ocean. The gray sky overhead casts a misty haze among the surface of the rippling sheet of liquid.

To the untrained eye, this seems but a body of water. But if you look at it carefully, you’ll see the beauty of the sea. It is the eighth wonder of the world.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Eighth Wonder of the World.

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like it :). I dont really know what to change or add but if I think of some thig I’ll tell u.:)

  2. The Eighth Wonder of the World.

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it. It has a brooding quality. Good.

  3. The Eighth Wonder of the World.

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice, :) I don’t know if i’d say the undersea creature relax though, lol i’ve seen too many animal planet programmes. I like the sensations you’re describing though.

    S.J.

  4. The Eighth Wonder of the World.

    lady e's Buddy Icon lady e

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    out of all of the stories i have read of yours, this is one of my favorites. makes me want to go there. nice!

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