Are we remembered?

by MissJonas1492

Are we remembered?

will u remember me ten years from now?
will i just be a faded memory frim old times past?
will u still love me the way u do now?
will u just remember me as an old girlfriend who was obsessed with u because you used to be perfect?
will u want to meet again?
will u wish u could forget me?

Or will u wear me as a memory, just like umix and match the clothes lying in your closet?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Are we remembered?

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like it! i really like the ending & how you made that pic so diff.=]]

  2. Are we remembered?

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree. The ending is good.

  3. Are we remembered?

    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Hehe cute. Hate to mention it though but the geek speak u, for you, isn’t quite accepted in the publishing world, (though you might get away with it in certain types of poetry.)

    Still very perceptive and cool

    S.J.

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!