What I See.

by Tears of Phoenix

Green. Blue. Brown. Hazel. Amber. Grey.

Cold. Warm. Laughing. Sparkling.

I’ve seen many eyes. I almost have to, where I work. Selling food 24/7, at a cash register in a store. I watch them go by, and don’t think anything more. Usually.

Her eyes were odd. They were intense. Green, with a hint of fire. She laughed. She made small talk.

She came back a week later.

It was gone. Her fire was out. She had the circles under her eyes that meant she hadn’t slept in a week. But worst of all, her eyes weren’t laughing anymore. They had a sign in the window, but I knew what they were doing in the back.

They were crying. She was so sad. I wanted to reach out right there and hold her, tell her to cry, that it was okay.

I wonder what her story was. I got the title from her eyes. I saw a book in that face, waiting to be written.

I wonder who will write it.

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  1. What I See.

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    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was lovely, a whole story…no, two stories in an eye. Great job with the imagery and metaphors without overdoing and keeping to the themes of both the eye and the retail experience. Great ficlet!
    LoA

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