He Really Cares?

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The rest of the day passed and Eve didn’t see Dante at all. Later at home she got a phone call.

“Hello?” She asked.

“Eve? Oh Eve! Please tell me Dante is over there. He didn’t come home from school like he was suppose to and he isn’t answering his cell.. We’re scared something bad happened to him..” Dante’s mother sobbed into the phone.

“No, Mrs. Brokes.. Dante and I had a fight today in school. I caught him with another girl again and havn’t seen him again.” Eve told Mrs. Brokes.

“Oh Eve.. Didn’t he ever explain that to you? Oh Sweety. You were all he ever talked about at home. He was always saying how he wanted more of you. When we found out what he did with Gabby and to you we yelled at him. We didn’t raise a boy to mistreat a girl as sweet as you. That’s when he told us he couldn’t help himself, he needed more Eve. Any girl he saw you in he wanted. You were his drug Eve..” Mrs. Brokes choked out.

“I’ll look for him Mrs. Brokes.” Eve said hanging up. He really cares about me that much?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. He Really Cares?

    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 3 months ago

    nice job explaining it, but the dialog seems a little off, for some reason. really good, though, I’ll sequel soon.

  2. He Really Cares?

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it! Nice, giving Eve some kind of realization.
    LoA

  3. He Really Cares?

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    amazing as always =]
    LoA

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