When Life Gives You Lemons Squirt the Juice in Your Enemies Eyes!

by CH

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. When Life Gives You Lemons Squirt the Juice in Your Enemies Eyes!

    CH's Buddy Icon CH

    Posted 2 months ago

    do u like it? say yes say yes say yes!! please. this is my first one and is probably bad. please comment and tell me what i could do better. btw this is a true story with the names changed

  2. When Life Gives You Lemons Squirt the Juice in Your Enemies Eyes!

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Needs more organization? It would make it a lot easier to read if you separated it into miniature paragraphs with a full line of space.

    Decent story, overall, though. It’s one everyone can identify with.

  3. When Life Gives You Lemons Squirt the Juice in Your Enemies Eyes!

    CH's Buddy Icon CH

    Posted 2 months ago

    alright thanks for the comment i will remember that

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