Flowers For You

by Dani H. Mefel

I’ll give you flowers
You can eat them
I’d hope too far for you to keep them
You can crush them
It would be too much of a wish for you to love them
I don’t care
But please just take them
And all you have to do is take them
Just take these flowers and remember
Me a forever flickering ember
And, and all you have to do is take them
Take these flowers
And never forget the things I regret
The things you thought I’d never do
Are all in a bouquet just for you

Comments

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Powerful. There is a lot of emotion here. I especially like the last two lines. Great poem.

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    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very nice Poem, thank you.

    S.J.

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    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    This is a lovely poem. It’s sweet, yet sour.

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    Punkin's Buddy Icon Punkin

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I enjoyed reading the poem. Bittersweet.

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