Colours

by Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

When I was five, I was in a car accident with my parents. For the most part, we came away okay. Bumps. Bruises. A very slight case of whiplash for my mother. Otherwise, we were all okay.

Except for my eyes. Ever since that accident, I’ve seen everything in shades of grey. Like watching an old movie, only it was actually the world around me.

I cried for days after the accident. For as long as my parents could remember, I had been fascinated by colour. No, not fascinated. Infatuated. Obsessed. Possessed.

I started painting when I was only three. Oh, hardly great works. Mickey Mouse was the Mona Lisa next to my art, but I didn’t care. It was the colours that mattered. They were all that mattered. Colours were my life.

And with one error in judgement, that was taken away from me.

Today, I saw the first colours I’ve seen in almost 15 years. They were even more vivid than what my memories could recall. More intense than my imagination could invent.

But why now? Why all of a sudden?

And why only her?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Colours

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    Intriguing, and it sets up that last line perfectly.
    LoA

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 3 months ago

    Awesome last line! And then my favorite line: Mickey Mouse was the Mona Lisa next to my art
    LoA

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OMG ! Was blind but now I see! I love colors and if I eery became color blind I don’t know what I would do.
    LoA

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    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow, that was undeniably the best Ficlet I’ve read today.
    I hope you don’t mind terribly if I sequel it.

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    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow, that was fabulous! Great descriptions!

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the ending. Why only her? Very intriguing.

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