One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

by Whinney

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”A WHAT !” I nearly screeched. “Now you see why it was so important that I talk to you. If this vampire finds out that I hang with you, it could get me killed. Our you!” Angie’s voice was sad, her head was bowed in thought.

“Wait I think I may have an idea here.” I said pacing back and forth. “You always said that I didn’t smell like my kind, you said it was the thing that kept you alive, I mean your parents hating werewolves and all.” My pacing slowed as I began to think this through. “But hey, I’ve been over to your house a lot and your parents don’t know, maybe he won’t either.” My expression was hopeful, Angie’s was doubtful. “It’s a good thought but what if his senses are sharper than my parents?” I stopped to look at her carefully, her question hung in the air for a minute. “Well then I can take care of myself!” I finaly said determinedly, sitting back down on the edge of the bed.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m drawn to vampire/werewolf stories, but this didn’t quite do it for me.
    While it’s an interesting concept, I found the dialogue a bit hard to follow (“enter” everytime someone else starts speaking), and felt it could have had a bit more depth.
    I do plan on following this series, because I want to know what happens.

  2. One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted 3 months ago

    Yeah I had to write this one really fast cuz i had to leave so i really need to slow down!
    hey thanks for your comment though
    Whinney

  3. One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I think it’s great and it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting to read more… I can’t wait to see where this one goes! Good job!
    LoA

  4. One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

    Miranda Ann's Buddy Icon Miranda Ann

    Posted 3 months ago

    I like it write more.

  5. One Vampire, One Werewolf, One Forbidden Love, P.4

    Whinney's Buddy Icon Whinney

    Posted 3 months ago

    thanx Ally, hey r u done w/ eclipse yet???
    Whinney

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