A Hundred Girls In Shibuya

by 自動

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  1. A Hundred Girls In Shibuya

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I was in Tokyo a few weeks ago (my first time) and I was impressed with Shibuya crossing. It was definitely a unique experience to be there.
    What I like about this piece is the fact that this girl sits in her own little bubble of pain in the midst of hundreds of pedestrians who seem too preoccupied with their busy lives to notice her.
    One small correction: the word “paid” is misspelled in your last paragraph.
    LoA

  2. A Hundred Girls In Shibuya

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Beautiful character study. I like its ambiguity, and how it’s wrapped around the very vivid image of cigarette sparks. Nice!

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