Russian Girls

by Valley Fey/Pinprick

Hans lit his cigarette and leaned back, handing his lighter off to Tatiana. She and Natasha continued to fawn over him as he reclined on the cheap couch. He peered from below the brim of a cap, his scalp still itchy from the hair dye he’d used a few days before. He tried to locate his target in the run-down Russian bar. Natasha said something he didn’t catch, and she and Tatiana burst into a fit of giggles. He stood, taking his lighter and touching the brim of his cap, “Ladies,” he said in English. The girls cooed in response.

He moved toward the bar, eager to get another drink. Alcohol was the only way to stave off the cold of a Russian winter, and February 1941 was no different. He leaned against the bar, “Peter,” he called to the aged bartender, a man he’d come to know quite well over the past few weeks, “Vodka, please. A bottle for me and the ladies.” So far, everyone had bought his American accent, even Petrov, who’d spent time in the states.

He took the bottle, didn’t want to keep the girls waiting.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Russian Girls

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted 2 months ago

    I thought that was positively brilliant! I could almost see his arrogant swagger.

  2. Russian Girls

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    hmm, who is his target? This made me think.
    I love the girls fawning over him and his fake accent! Brilliant!
    LoA

  3. Russian Girls

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great exposition. It works well as a stand-alone, but of course, I want to know more!
    LoA

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