Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

by Laine P. Grey

Saint Chuck found himself in English class…again. Never mind the fact that his teacher was frowning over his shoulder in efforts to decipher his words. He was on a mission.

As soon as her head turned – - and her enormous hair a few seconds later – - he finished jotting down the story ideas. “Yes…yes, brilliant!” He cried loudly, causing some odd looks. With a small smile, Saint Chuck bowed his head, making a mental note to be aware of his surroundings.

When the last bell rang, and he had sidled past the ill-tempered instructor, Saint Chuck ran home as soon as he could. And signed onto Ficlets.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    A fine tribute to the mad scribe. Although isn’t he a she? : )

  2. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 3 months ago

    I believe…yes…that Saint Chuck is indeed a young lady…=]
    LoA

  3. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted 3 months ago

    Not sure….there was some speculation on that subject.

  4. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 3 months ago

    I believe Chuck is for Charlotte…s/he said that at one point

  5. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like it. very saint chuck like. he or she

  6. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 3 months ago

    I love the way the teacher’s massive hair followed after her head turned. lol, I can relate to saint chucks haste to break away from school and write what he wants and not what the assignments dictate. And you used one of my all time fav words : Sidled. Great job, thanks for entering my challenge.

  7. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Funny little moment of adolescence, I thought. Very cute. And I have to say I think it’s hilarious how ambiguous gender is for even some of our more well-known ficleteers. I think that’s a good thing.
    LoA

  8. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    funny story.. I can remember being that eager to get out of school. There was always something more important, brewing upstairs.

  9. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 3 months ago

    Ok well this just made my day. Very fitting…I did actually write one of my most recent ficlets in school. Thanks and great job!

    And to clear up the confusion…well actually, why should I clear up the confusion?

  10. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    User 8538's Buddy Icon User 8538

    Posted 3 months ago

    good job

  11. Saint Chuck (Your Pen Name Here Challenge)

    User 8538's Buddy Icon User 8538

    Posted 3 months ago

    good job

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