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Surfing Lessons

by .:band baby:.

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Bernard and I walk into the town, looking for a swin suit store. Neither of us had ours, obviously, having rushed out of Tenesse so quickly.

“There!” I say pointing at a store and then takeing off into it. I want something to show-off my body to other guys Bernard. I find just the one shortly after. I grab my size and meet Bernard at the register where he had been waiting for at least 10 minutes, having grabbed the first suit in his size.

We buy the suits and then put them on under our clothes. Afterwards, we finally make it down the beach. Stipping to our suits, I run into the icy ocean water. Bernard follows me, splashing as we went. I laughed so hard in the first couple minutes.

When I was shaky we walk to the surf board stand. A cute guy about 16 was just opening up the shop.

“You guys here for lessons?” He asks, looking directly at me.

“Yeah.” I answer, giving him a flirty smile that doesn’t go unnoticed by Bernard.

“Grab a board and a wet suit, then.” Cute guy says.

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  1. Surfing Lessons

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Faith, focus on Bernard! Lol!
    LoA

  2. Surfing Lessons

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 7 months ago

    Stay focused on Bernard. dont lose him after all hes done for u !lol!

  3. Surfing Lessons

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 7 months ago

    funny ficlet. Alot is bubbling beneath the surface, bubbling in a bath of teenage hormones.lol

  4. Surfing Lessons

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 7 months ago

    haha i love the little details you add it makes the story so much more intersting! great job =]

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