If you listen closely...

by Sailor Emo

Stay happy. Become happier than I ever could be. Than I ever can be, without you. But no, please don’t turn and look back at me, Don’t regret what you choose, you can go. Don’t regret this, I love you.
Goodbye.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. If you listen closely...

    [pen.up.girl]'s Buddy Icon [pen.up.girl]

    Posted 2 months ago

    This is exactly what they all say to make it easier. But you revealed what people are really screaming inside in a creative way.

    Awesome.

  2. If you listen closely...

    heartbeats echocho's Buddy Icon heartbeats echocho

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nicely done. i agree with [pen. up. girl] awesome how you wrote what some people are really thinking…reminds me of another ficlet, one i wrote actually. as for the memories, check it out :)...
    LoA

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