RE: To My True Love

by Jay

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Now wait just a damn minute!
True love? You’re not in it!
After what you did the other day,
you’d just better stay away.
I saw you hittin’ up that other girl,
right after you told me I was your world.
Well, you can have that stanky ho!
She’s been around, I’ll have you know.

So don’t you wait for me to call.
You want me back? You’ll have to crawl!
I’ve had it with your nice-guy schemes.
You want me back? In your dreams!

I should have seen it from the start.
You’re a cruel man with a twisted heart.

So don’t tell me that I broke your heart.
And don’t call that sickly poem art.

PS: Txt me later!

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. RE: To My True Love

    Awkward Turtle's Buddy Icon Awkward Turtle

    Posted about 1 year ago

    thanks for making fun of my writing

  2. RE: To My True Love

    User 2864's Buddy Icon User 2864

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked it and i dont think that it was or puposely making fun of awkward turtles poem. i did like it and i thought it was good

  3. RE: To My True Love

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was excellent – the rhymes weren’t predictable and the last line was classic.
    And, you get a star just for using nice-guy schemes.

  4. RE: To My True Love

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 4 months ago

    Late comment I know, but I just seen it now.
    It was great, love it!!

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