Within The Universe (A Poem)

by Tad Winslow

The transparent surface reflects

Flesh eclipsing

My skeleton’s silence,

While all around me

The universe

Vastly veils an

Absent echo’s stare

That shatters stillness

And invites awakening.

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  1. Within The Universe (A Poem)

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I adore poetry like nobody’s business (and we, after all, in the midst of poetry month!). This is a great poem. Very good alliteration.
    LoA

  2. Within The Universe (A Poem)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    nice poem! It is great to read your stories again!
    LoA

  3. Within The Universe (A Poem)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Don’t know if I’ve seen poetry from you before. Kind of gives me a big, wondering feeling, the poem I mean.
    LoA

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