Cry (A True Story)

by emma jo_234

An hour later, they let us back into the school.

The seventh grade was instructed to go to their sixth hour classes. On my way, I passed the Unified Arts wing. It was roped off, and I glimpsed policemen, standing and talking with the principal.

In Language Arts, sixth period, my teacher let us talk and play games. Everyone was discussing the situation animatedly – everyone had an opinion that they wanted to share.

Me, I just sat there.

We switched classes at the regular time, and I crossed the hall for Math.

My teacher talked to us about the incident, explaining some things and asking about others. I continued to sit in silence.

Tears welled in my eyes.

Don’t cry.

Please don’t.

People asked me if I was okay, and I said nothing.

Finally my teacher came and sat down next to me, asking if I wanted to talk, if everything was alright.

When I stayed silent, she took me out in the hall to get a drink, even though the teachers weren’t supposed to give hall passes.

And only then did I cry.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Cry (A True Story)

    Valley Fey/Pinprick's Buddy Icon Valley Fey/Pinprick

    Posted 2 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    The story is penned well, with great imagery, but I still don’t understand why you’re crying. What exactly is going through your head?

  2. Cry (A True Story)

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 2 months ago

    Very good point, pinprick. I wrote a sequel and hope it clears things up a little.
    LoA

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