On The Porch

by THX 0477

“Oh, to sit in a comfortable rocker on the front porch and waste away the hours with only a cat and the sunshine for company,” Tess said with a sigh, the sigh that came with any statement pushed out by her aged and ailing lungs.

Charlie, equally aged and ailing as Tess’ lungs, cocked his head, “Am I supposed to take that personal like?”

“Take it how you wanna’ take it,” she muttered quietly, fanning herself using a fan emblazoned with the words ‘Rev. Jefferson’s Requiem and Revival’ and a dove, all in purple on the yellowing white paper. The dove had been Mrs. Jefferson’s idea, a fact of which she reminded him frequently.

“I’ll take it as time for me to get on up in this house here and pour me another glass of iced tea before I…before I…ah, forget it,” he finished in a huff, rustling and squirming his way out of his own rocking chair.

But he paused and did not rise from his chair, which took some time to be evident owing to how inordinately long it generally took him to get up from a seated position.

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    SJHundak/S.J.Willing's Buddy Icon SJHundak/S.J.Willing

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    interesting.

    S.J.

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this is the AAAICOF here to erase your message of “interesting” for lack of comment.
    thank you.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    You’ve captured these two characters quite completely in such a small space.

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 9 months ago

    You really have! This is great…I love the descriptions.

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